Unit 1 Task 3 Paraphrasing

 It is essential for engineering students to understand the importance of communication as the absence of creativity will be stagnant within small teams instead of becoming more idealogical products. While the more experienced engineers are aware of these errors, the real question is why they did not impliment it when they are still students.

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  1. Lim Wen JueJanuary 12, 2022 at 5:31 PM

    I think you have to include the quote that you are paraphrasing from.

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  2. Amirul's BlogJanuary 12, 2022 at 5:31 PM

    sounds good! just need to add your citations

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  3. Valencia LauJanuary 12, 2022 at 5:37 PM

    Add your citations including the author

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